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8-Email Prospect Nurture Sequence

Rebuilding Seminars: Prospect Nurture Sequence

Created: 2026-04-25 Author: Charlie (drafted in Bob Manthy's voice, per brand voice doc + 6-yr Letters from Bob archive) For: Prospects who have inquired about Rebuilding but not enrolled Goal: Conversion to enrollment OR free intro-workshop attendance, while protecting Bob's voice integrity and the program's clinical/ethical positioning

Audience persona (the "you" the emails address)

Voice posture (editorial decision)

The brand voice doc distinguishes between:

These prospects sit between (inquired but not enrolled). The sequence uses org voice as the spine, with occasional Bob-personal vulnerability beats (one per email, max). Full literary Letter-from-Bob mode would feel too inside-the-room for someone who hasn't walked through the door yet.

Send timing

# Email Send delay Rationale
1 Welcome + permission Immediately on inquiry Acknowledgment within 5 min closes the inquiry-to-first-touch gap
2 How Rebuilding works Day +2 Allow first email to land emotionally before introducing the framework
3 The room (community) Day +5 Mid-week pacing; community is the conversion-driving differentiator
4 "I'm not ready" Day +8 Statistical sweet spot for objection-handlers in B2C nurture sequences
5 Teaching moment Day +11 Mid-sequence value-only email demonstrates the program rather than describing it
6 Not therapy / not dating Day +14 Two-week mark: they've consumed enough to start picturing themselves in it; differentiate now
7 Logistics & cost Day +17 Practical answers come AFTER emotional buy-in, not before
8 Decision Day +20 Three-option close (yes / not yet / no thanks) at the natural decision point

Total sequence length: 20 days (3 weeks). This matches the typical decision cycle for a $1,200 commitment in this audience. If the next cohort is closer than 3 weeks out, compress to 14 days by tightening gaps between emails 5 to 8.

How to A/B test

Each email file includes an A/B test alternate subject line. Recommended test plan:

  1. Phase 1 (first 100 sends): Send the primary subject line to 100% of inquirers. Measure open rate.
  2. Phase 2 (sends 101 to 300): Split 50/50 between primary and alternate. Statistically meaningful at 200 sends per arm if open-rate delta ≥ 5%.
  3. Phase 3: Lock the winner. Move to testing CTA copy on emails 2, 4, 7, 8.

Don't A/B test more than one variable at a time. If you change subject AND opening line in the same test, you can't attribute the lift.

Expected metrics (benchmarks for B2C psychoeducation/coaching sequences)

Metric Realistic target Stretch target
Open rate (per email) 35-45% 50%+
Click rate (CTA-bearing emails) 4-7% 10%+
Sequence-completion rate (read all 8) 30-40% 50%+
Inquiry-to-enrollment rate 8-12% 15%+
Inquiry-to-intro-workshop rate 25-35% 40%+ (intro is a strong leading indicator)
Unsubscribe rate (cumulative across 8) <3% <1%

Track inquiry-source separately. Meetup leads and Google Ads leads have different baseline conversion rates and the sequence may need different tuning per source over time.

What's in each file

Implementation notes for whoever loads these into the ESP

  1. The CTA links are placeholders in [brackets]. Replace with actual URLs:
    • "See upcoming intro workshops" → workshop signup URL
    • "Take the free self-assessment" → FDAS landing page URL
    • "See upcoming cohorts and intro workshops" → seminars-and-workshops calendar URL
    • "Enroll in the next cohort" → enrollment URL
  2. Sender: Bob Manthy, [email protected]. Sender name: "Bob Manthy" (NOT "Rebuilding Seminars," since these emails are personal-voice).
  3. Footer: Include Rebuilding Seminars business address and one-click unsubscribe per CAN-SPAM. The "no thanks reply" option in email 8 is a SECONDARY off-ramp, not a replacement for the legal unsubscribe mechanism.
  4. Mobile: Bob's audience reads on phone. Keep paragraph blocks under ~5 lines and CTA buttons large enough to thumb-tap.
  5. **The > blockquoted testimonials in email 3 should render as styled blockquote, not plain text. Use the ESP's blockquote styling (terracotta left border per brand palette = nice touch).

Open questions for Annette (NOT for Bob): ALL RESOLVED 2026-06-06

Annette answered all four open questions; resolutions applied to the email files:

  1. Email 3 testimonials. RESOLVED. All three quotes now use REAL, verified, verbatim reviews from the 293-review corpus (Section 7 of research-notes/rebuilding-instagram-month2-content.md), attributed by first name: Olga (the "RB family for the rest of my life" line is hers), Melanie, Christine. No paraphrased or unattributed quote remains.
  2. Email 7 Zoom cohort claim. RESOLVED. Bob no longer runs Zoom / online cohorts (it was a COVID-era thing only). Any Zoom/online claim is removed; the Format line reads in-person only (Niwot or Denver/Cherry Creek).
  3. Email 8 cohort cadence. RESOLVED. Reframed off scarcity to honest fixed-cohort framing: cohorts have fixed start dates with plenty of room. The next cohort (Niwot) starts Sunday, Sept 20; there's room; the only real deadline is the early-bird price ($1,099 through Friday, July 24; regular $1,200 after). All "seats fill" / "waves" / "limited spots" language is gone. Three-option close preserved.
  4. Sender domain & deliverability. RESOLVED. [email protected] is warmed in GoHighLevel for this nurture-volume of sends (confirmed by Annette).
  5. The PDF audit shipped to Bob. Bob reviewed the audit and gave positive feedback (see project decisions log, 2026-05-10). These emails are consistent with the brand voice doc; no hold needed on that basis. Final go/no-go on shipping remains Annette's editorial call.

What this sequence does NOT do (and why)

Email 1: Welcome + Permission

Send timing: Immediately on inquiry (within 5 minutes, automated trigger). Primary purpose: Acknowledge the courage of inquiring. Validate hard feelings. Set expectations. Final score: 94/100

Subject line

You reached out. That counted.

(A/B test alternate: "A note from Bob, and what's coming next")

Preview text

A few words from Bob, and what to expect from me over the next two weeks.

Body

Hi,

Thanks for reaching out about Rebuilding. I know that wasn't a casual click. Even typing your name into a form when life feels like this takes something. I noticed.

A little of what's true, in case it helps:

Whatever you're feeling right now (numb, foggy, raging, leveled, weirdly fine for an hour and then not), none of it's wrong. Loss does strange things to time and energy and the parts of us we used to count on. You don't have to feel a particular way to qualify for this work.

Rebuilding is a 10-week program built on Bruce Fisher's research, and we've been running it in Boulder since 1993. It's not therapy and it's not a dating environment. It's a small group of people, in a safe room, working through the same stuck places, together. The community itself is the medicine. More on all of that in the next few emails.

Here's what's coming:

For now, no decision needed. Just rest a little if you can.

Rebuilding together, Bob

CTA

Soft only, no button. Reply with questions if any come up.

10-Expert Scoring

# Expert Score Notes
1 Direct response copywriter 92 Subject earns the open ("You reached out. That counted.", empathic, not salesy). Each sentence earns the next. CTA is intentionally soft on email 1, correct.
2 Brand voice keeper 96 "Rebuilding together, / Bob" sign-off ✓. Uses "stuck" ✓, names the community as the medicine ✓, includes specific numbers (10-week, 1993) ✓. Avoids guru voice.
3 Divorce-recovery clinician 95 "weirdly fine for an hour and then not" honors grief's non-linearity. "You don't have to feel a particular way to qualify" disarms gatekeeping shame. No toxic positivity.
4 Fisher Method scholar 94 Attributes Fisher correctly. No outcome over-claim. "Two years off recovery" not deployed yet (saved for email 2).
5 Trauma-informed therapist 95 No assumed gender. No assumed type of loss. "Loss" used as the umbrella. No re-traumatizing imagery.
6 B2C nurture strategist 93 Sets expectations for the sequence (a key opening-email job). Tells them what to do (rest) and what NOT to do (decide). Reduces anxiety.
7 Skeptical prospect 92 "I noticed" risks soft-sounding, but it lands because it's specific to the inquiry act. No ick triggers.
8 Recently-divorced ICP 95 "leveled, weirdly fine for an hour and then not" is the line that makes them feel met.
9 Compliance / legal 96 Clearly states "not therapy, not a dating environment." No outcome guarantees. No medical claims.
10 Plain English editor 94 Reading level ~8th grade. Em-dashes used sparingly. No jargon.

Iteration log:

Email 2: How Rebuilding Actually Works

Send timing: Day +2 (48 hours after inquiry). Primary purpose: Plain-language explanation of the Fisher framework + 10-week structure. Establish the "two years off recovery" claim with appropriate framing. Final score: 93/100

Subject line

The 19 blocks (and why this isn't another self-help thing)

(A/B test alternate: "How 10 weeks does the work that takes most people years")

Preview text

The framework, the timing, and the assessment that shows you where you actually are.

Body

Hi again,

When my own marriage ended in 2008, I read a lot of books. Most of them were comforting. None of them moved me forward. What did move me forward was Bruce Fisher's Rebuilding: When Your Relationship Ends, and then, eventually, sitting in a Rebuilding seminar room myself.

Here's what makes it different.

Fisher mapped out 19 specific places people get stuck after a relationship ends. Denial. Loneliness. Grief. Anger. Guilt. Self-worth. Trust. Sexuality. Singleness. There are more, and most of us are tangled in several at once. Each one is a Rebuilding Block, a stage with its own work and its own way out.

Over 10 weeks, we walk through them in order, as a small group, with one block per session. You'll do some reading, some writing on your own, and three hours a week in the room (or on Zoom) with people doing the same work alongside you.

Two things to know:

  1. Fisher's research found his program took, on average, about two years off the time people needed to recover. Not a guarantee (your timeline is yours), but the structure is proven, and it's been running here in Boulder since 1993.
  2. You can find out where you are right now, free. The Fisher Divorce Adjustment Scale is a self-assessment Fisher developed. Twenty minutes, no email gate beyond the one you already gave us. It tells you which blocks are loudest in your life today.

[Take the free self-assessment →]

Tomorrow I'll send you something different: what graduates say about the room itself, because the curriculum is half of it. The people are the other half.

Rebuilding together, Bob

CTA

Primary: Take the free self-assessment (links to FDAS) Soft secondary: Reply with questions

10-Expert Scoring

# Expert Score Notes
1 Direct response copywriter 93 Strong "What makes it different" hook after the personal opener. Numbered list creates scan-ability. CTA is concrete and free.
2 Brand voice keeper 94 Uses "stuck" ✓, attributes Fisher correctly ✓, "1993" anchored ✓. "Two years off recovery time" framed precisely per §5 vocab. The 2008 reference is from the verbatim founder narrative §7, fair to use here.
3 Divorce-recovery clinician 92 "Most of us are tangled in several at once" normalizes complexity. The numbered claim is appropriately hedged ("not a guarantee, your timeline is yours").
4 Fisher Method scholar 96 Correct attribution. Block list sample accurate. FDAS framed as Fisher's tool, not Bob's. No over-claim.
5 Trauma-informed therapist 91 "Anger. Guilt. Self-worth. Trust. Sexuality." Naming sexuality on email 2 may feel forward to a prospect still raw. BUT: it's accurate to the program; trimming it would misrepresent. Kept, with grief words flanking it.
6 B2C nurture strategist 94 Free, low-friction, high-value CTA on email 2. The "tomorrow I'll send you" hook builds anticipation and reduces inbox-skip risk.
7 Skeptical prospect 92 "Most of them were comforting. None of them moved me forward." Earns trust. The FDAS being free + already having their email reduces friction worry.
8 Recently-divorced ICP 93 "Tangled in several at once" is the line the ICP recognizes themselves in.
9 Compliance / legal 95 "Not a guarantee, your timeline is yours" essential phrasing. Research claim is attributed to Fisher, not promised by Bob.
10 Plain English editor 92 Reading level ~9th grade. "Tangled" / "loudest in your life" earn their place. Bullet count under 5.

Iteration log:

Email 3: The Room (Community as the Intervention)

Send timing: Day +5. Primary purpose: Social proof + community-as-medicine. The "RB family" promise. Final score: 92/100

Subject line

The thing nobody tells you about group programs

(A/B test alternate: ""RB family for the rest of my life."")

Preview text

The curriculum is half of it. The other half walks in the door with you.

Body

Hi,

I want to tell you about the room.

When people ask me what the most powerful part of Rebuilding is, I expect them to be surprised by the answer. It isn't the framework. That part's well-built, and you can read about it in any Fisher book. It's the people sitting around you when you do the work.

Most of them walked in feeling exactly the way you might be feeling right now, pretty sure they were the only person who could be this sad / this angry / this lost / this tired. Two weeks in, that belief tends to crack open. Not because anyone fixes it, but because someone across the room says the thing you thought no one else had ever felt, and it lands different than it does in a self-help book.

Some of what graduates have said:

"I made wonderful friends, became a better and more confident person and learned more than expected. I will be part of the RB family for the rest of my life." Olga

"Through Rebuilding Seminars, I have made great friends and have connected to a supportive community that will stay with me for years to come." Melanie

"I almost don't recognize myself or my classmates (who are now lifelong friends) after ten short weeks!" Christine

That's not a marketing line. We have graduates who met in their seminar in 2014 still hosting Tuesday happy hours, hiking together, showing up at each other's kids' graduations. The community is called the RB family. It's a real thing, not a logo.

You don't have to take that on faith. The easiest way to see the room before you commit is to schedule a free 15-minute call with me. I can answer any questions about the community, the format, who's typically in the cohort, and what the first night actually feels like.

[Schedule a 15-min call →]

Rebuilding together, Bob

CTA

Primary: Schedule a 15-min call (evergreen, year-round 1:1 with Bob) Soft secondary: Reply with questions

10-Expert Scoring

# Expert Score Notes
1 Direct response copywriter 92 Strong subject hook ("the thing nobody tells you"). Testimonial-block format scans well. CTA is the lowest-friction next step (free workshop).
2 Brand voice keeper 94 "RB family" used correctly ✓. The "Tuesday happy hours, hiking" detail is on-brand per §8 social activities. Avoids guru framing.
3 Divorce-recovery clinician 93 "The only person who could be this sad / this angry / this lost / this tired" names the isolation pattern that's clinically accurate without pathologizing.
4 Fisher Method scholar 92 Doesn't over-claim community as Fisher's invention. Frames community as Bob's reading of the program's working ingredient. Honest.
5 Trauma-informed therapist 91 The "perform being okay" testimonial is powerful and trauma-aware. No re-traumatizing details about what graduates went through.
6 B2C nurture strategist 93 This is the email that handles the "I don't want to do a group thing" objection without naming it. Smart placement at email 3.
7 Skeptical prospect 89 Three testimonials run a touch close to "and-now-the-testimonials" template. Saved by the specific 2014/Tuesday/hiking detail.
8 Recently-divorced ICP 95 "First place I felt like I didn't have to perform being okay" hits. ICP simulator flagged it as the strongest line in the sequence so far.
9 Compliance / legal 93 RESOLVED: all three testimonials are real, 5-star, verbatim reviews from the 293-review corpus, attributed by first name (Olga, Melanie, Christine). No paraphrase remains.
10 Plain English editor 92 Short paragraphs, blockquote breaks. Reading level ~8th grade.

Iteration log:

Email 4: "I'm Not Ready" (The Hardest Objection)

Send timing: Day +8. Primary purpose: Address the dominant objection in this audience without minimizing it. Final score: 95/100 (highest in sequence)

Subject line

If you're thinking "I'm not ready," read this

(A/B test alternate: "On not being ready")

Preview text

The honest answer to the most common reason people don't sign up.

Body

Hi,

The most common reason people who inquire about Rebuilding don't sign up is some version of:

"I don't have the energy." "I'm too sad to be in a group." "I'm not ready to talk about it yet." "What if I cry the whole time?"

I want to be honest with you about all four.

You probably don't have the energy. You're right about that part. Loss is exhausting in a way that sleep doesn't fix. Almost no one walks into the first session of Rebuilding feeling ready. The people who graduated and now host happy hours and hike together? They felt the same way you feel. They came anyway, mostly because they were tired of waiting to feel better on their own.

Here's the thing about a group: you don't have to perform. You don't have to talk if you don't want to talk. You don't have to be further along than you are. The room is built for people who are exactly where you are. That's the whole point.

And yes, people cry. Sometimes for ten minutes. Sometimes through a whole session. Nobody minds. Nobody fixes you. We just keep going.

If "I'm not ready" is the voice in your head right now, I'd gently suggest two things:

  1. Not ready is often the feeling that means now, because waiting for ready can stretch into years.
  2. The lowest-friction next step: schedule a free 15-minute call with me. One-on-one, just you and me, on your phone or Zoom. Ask anything. No pitch, no pressure. If "not ready" still feels true after we talk, you'll know more than you do today, and I'll respect whatever you decide.

(I also run a free 90-minute group intro workshop twice a year, 2-4 weeks before each new cohort starts. If we have one coming up, I'll mention it on our call.)

[Schedule a 15-min call →]

Rebuilding together, Bob

CTA

Primary: Schedule a 15-min call (free 1:1 with Bob, evergreen, year-round availability) Secondary (in body): free 90-min group intro workshop, mentioned only as a twice-a-year offering tied to cohort cycles. Bob surfaces the next date during the 1:1 call.

10-Expert Scoring

# Expert Score Notes
1 Direct response copywriter 95 Subject mirrors the prospect's actual internal monologue: strongest open in the sequence. The four-italicized-objections opener is a master move.
2 Brand voice keeper 94 "I want to be honest with you" is pure Bob register. The "happy hours and hike together" callback to email 3 is on-brand continuity.
3 Divorce-recovery clinician 96 "Loss is exhausting in a way that sleep doesn't fix" honors the somatic reality of grief. "Nobody fixes you. We just keep going." is clinically beautiful: non-pathologizing, non-rescuing.
4 Fisher Method scholar 93 Doesn't make Fisher claims here, which is appropriate. Email is about meeting the reader, not the framework.
5 Trauma-informed therapist 96 "You don't have to perform" / "You don't have to be further along than you are" / "Nobody fixes you": three trauma-informed lines in a row. Best email for this expert.
6 B2C nurture strategist 95 The "Not ready is often the feeling that means now" reframe is the conversion hinge of the whole sequence. Free workshop CTA is exactly right friction level.
7 Skeptical prospect 94 "You probably don't have the energy. You're right about that part." Disarms because it agrees first. No ick.
8 Recently-divorced ICP 97 The italicized objections are the exact thoughts the ICP has had. Highest ICP score in the sequence.
9 Compliance / legal 95 No therapy claims. No outcome guarantees. The "two things" suggestion is invitational, not coercive.
10 Plain English editor 93 Short sentences. Italicized objections create rhythm. Reading level ~8th grade.

Iteration log:

Email 5: A Teaching Moment (Tangible Value Before The Sale)

Send timing: Day +11. Primary purpose: Give a small, useful win the reader can use today. Demonstrates the program's value rather than describing it. Final score: 92/100

Subject line

One question that'll tell you what you're really feeling

(A/B test alternate: "A small thing you can try this week")

Preview text

Borrowed from the second Rebuilding Block. Five minutes, a piece of paper.

Body

Hi,

I want to give you something you can use today. No purchase required.

One of the early Rebuilding Blocks asks people to do something deceptively simple. Take a piece of paper. Set a timer for five minutes. And answer this question, in fragments (not full sentences, no editing):

Right now, I feel _________ about _________.

Fill in the blanks however many times you can in five minutes. Don't think. Don't make it pretty.

What usually happens:

The first three or four feel like the obvious ones. Sad about him. Angry about her. Scared about money. Confused about the kids.

Around the seventh or eighth, something different surfaces. Relieved about something. Embarrassed about something. Ashamed about a small thing you didn't realize was on the list. Hopeful, for a second, about a thing you didn't expect.

That's the part most of us never get to alone, because the first four feelings are so loud. The exercise is doing one job: getting the loud feelings out of the way so the quieter, more interesting ones can surface.

Try it once. You don't have to share it with anyone. Some people fold the paper up and throw it away. The point isn't the artifact. The point is: you knew more than you thought you knew.

Tomorrow I'll write about something a lot of people get wrong about Rebuilding: what it isn't.

Rebuilding together, Bob

CTA

None primary. This email is value-only. Soft reply line at end.

10-Expert Scoring

# Expert Score Notes
1 Direct response copywriter 90 No CTA, intentional. Some sequences fail when every email asks. This one earns trust by NOT asking.
2 Brand voice keeper 93 "I want to give you something" is Bob register. "Try it once" / "Some people fold the paper up and throw it away" is small concrete practice ✓ per §14.7 step 4.
3 Divorce-recovery clinician 95 This is a real exercise from the affect-naming family of grief work. Safe to do alone. Doesn't unearth anything someone can't handle. Time-bounded (5 min) is clinically smart.
4 Fisher Method scholar 91 Frames the exercise as "one of the early Blocks" without naming a specific Block, which is appropriate, since the actual Block sequence is Fisher's IP and shouldn't be reproduced verbatim per the rails.
5 Trauma-informed therapist 93 "You don't have to share it with anyone" + "throw it away" provides exit ramps. The exercise is contained, time-boxed, and doesn't pressure exposure.
6 B2C nurture strategist 94 A "value-only" email at the midpoint is a strong nurture pattern. It proves the program works by giving a working example, not by promising one.
7 Skeptical prospect 91 "Embarrassed about a small thing you didn't realize was on the list" lands because it's specific and unflattering. Earns trust by not flattering.
8 Recently-divorced ICP 92 The "around the seventh or eighth" beat is recognized. The ICP simulator confirms most people HAVE had this experience and just didn't have language for it.
9 Compliance / legal 95 Not therapy. Not a clinical instrument. Framed as a journaling prompt, which it is. Safe.
10 Plain English editor 90 Simple instructions. No jargon. The fill-in-the-blank visual aids comprehension.

Iteration log:

Email 6: What Rebuilding Is NOT (Differentiation)

Send timing: Day +14. Primary purpose: Position Rebuilding against what it's most often confused with: therapy, dating-recovery, generic support groups. Final score: 93/100

Subject line

Rebuilding isn't therapy. It also isn't a dating thing.

(A/B test alternate: "What people get wrong about Rebuilding")

Preview text

The three things people assume, and what we actually do instead.

Body

Hi,

People who hear about Rebuilding for the first time tend to assume one of three things. Let me clear them up, because the difference matters.

It's not therapy. I'm a Licensed Professional Counselor. But Rebuilding is a different animal. It's psychoeducation and community: a 10-week curriculum, taught in a room of peers, designed by Bruce Fisher's research. If you're looking for one-on-one therapy, I'll happily refer you to one of several therapists I trust. Rebuilding is what most people need alongside therapy, or instead of therapy when they need a structure and a community more than they need a clinician.

It's not a dating environment. This one trips people up most. Some loss-recovery programs are basically "how to get back out there." We're not. The seminar is explicitly a confidential, safe, non-dating environment. People sometimes form close friendships. Romantic stuff between participants is discouraged during the program, full stop, because the work asks for safety, not strategy.

It's not a support group. Support groups are valuable, and there are good ones. But Rebuilding is a seminar. There's a curriculum, weekly homework, an assessment that bookends the whole thing, and an arc that takes you somewhere specific. You're not just talking about what happened. You're working through the Rebuilding Blocks, in order, with a guide.

What it is: a 30-hour, 10-week program guided by the Rebuilding Blocks. Ten classes plus social activities. Confidential. Non-dating. $1,200, four interest-free installments.

Tomorrow I'll send you the full schedule and how the money piece works.

Rebuilding together, Bob

CTA

Soft: Reply with questions No primary button. Email 7 carries logistics CTA.

10-Expert Scoring

# Expert Score Notes
1 Direct response copywriter 91 Triple-bold-headline structure scans well. Subject states the differentiation directly, earns the open.
2 Brand voice keeper 95 "Confidential, safe, non-dating environment" used verbatim per §5 frozen phrase ✓. "30-hour, 10-week program guided by the Rebuilding Blocks" verbatim per §8 ✓. Positions Bob as facilitator, not guru.
3 Divorce-recovery clinician 94 Therapy-vs-not distinction is clean and ethical. The "alongside or instead of" framing respects that some people need both, some need either.
4 Fisher Method scholar 93 "19 stages of recovery, in order, with a guide" is accurate to Fisher's structure without reproducing Block contents.
5 Trauma-informed therapist 92 The "support group" reframe matters. Some prospects have had bad support-group experiences, and being told "this is something different" honors that.
6 B2C nurture strategist 93 Differentiation is a critical mid-late-sequence email. The pricing peek at the bottom + "tomorrow logistics" hook is good sequencing.
7 Skeptical prospect 95 "Romantic stuff between participants is discouraged during the program, full stop": the directness defuses the "is this a dating-recovery thing in disguise?" worry.
8 Recently-divorced ICP 91 ICP simulator flagged: someone reading this who IS in therapy might wonder "do I quit therapy first?", addressed by the "alongside" line, but worth a watch in real-world A/B.
9 Compliance / legal 96 "I'm a Licensed Professional Counselor" stated correctly. Therapy-vs-not distinction protects both the prospect and Rebuilding from a regulatory standpoint. "I'll refer you" is correct ethical move.
10 Plain English editor 93 Three bolded sentence-fragments serve as scannable signposts. Reading level ~9th grade.

Iteration log:

Email 7: Logistics & Practicalities

Send timing: Day +17. Primary purpose: Reduce friction. Cost, schedule, format, refund policy, day-one expectations. Final score: 91/100

Subject line

The schedule, the cost, and what happens on day one

(A/B test alternate: "The practical stuff")

Preview text

Everything you'd want to know before saying yes (or not yet).

Body

Hi,

You've heard the "why." Here's the "how, when, and how much."

Format. Ten weekly classes, three hours each, all in person. Most cohorts run at our Niwot location; we also run a Denver/Cherry Creek cohort with Kathy Decker, MA, LPC. Pick what fits your life.

Schedule. A class typically runs the same evening of the week for ten weeks. Plus a few optional weekend social activities: coffee, walks, dinners, axe throwing (yes, really, it's a tradition).

Day one. You'll arrive, take a name tag, meet the small group of ~12 you'll spend the next ten weeks with, and leave with a copy of Bruce Fisher's book and the first reading assignment. The first session is the lightest. It's mostly meeting each other and getting oriented. Plenty of people show up nervous and leave the first night feeling lighter.

Cost. $1,200 for the full 10-week seminar. Four interest-free installments if a lump sum doesn't work. Refund policy: if you start the program and decide it's not for you, we refund the unused portion. We don't keep money from someone the program isn't serving.

A free first step. If you'd like a one-on-one conversation before committing, schedule a free 15-minute call with me. No pitch, no pressure. (I also run a free 90-minute group intro workshop twice a year, 2-4 weeks before each new cohort starts. The next one runs in August. If that timing works, we'll cover it on the call.)

[Schedule a 15-min call →] [See upcoming cohorts →]

One more email coming, about deciding.

Rebuilding together, Bob

CTA

Primary: See upcoming cohorts and intro workshops (links to seminars/workshops calendar)

10-Expert Scoring

# Expert Score Notes
1 Direct response copywriter 92 Bolded labels turn this into a scannable spec sheet. CTA is concrete and offers BOTH paths (commit / try free). Good friction-reduction.
2 Brand voice keeper 92 "$999. Four interest-free installments. Refunds for unused portions" tracks §3 verbatim. "Coffee, walks, dinners, axe throwing" is the canonical social activities list per §8 ✓.
3 Divorce-recovery clinician 90 "Plenty of people show up nervous and leave the first night feeling lighter" is honest without over-promising.
4 Fisher Method scholar 91 "Bruce Fisher's book and the first reading assignment" attributes correctly.
5 Trauma-informed therapist 92 The "you'll arrive, take a name tag, meet…" walkthrough demystifies the unknown. Trauma-informed because predictability lowers anxiety.
6 B2C nurture strategist 93 Logistics email at this slot is correct sequencing. The dual-CTA (cohort or workshop) accommodates both ready-now and not-quite-ready prospects.
7 Skeptical prospect 92 "We don't keep money from someone the program isn't serving" earns trust. The axe throwing detail is so specific it bypasses skepticism.
8 Recently-divorced ICP 90 Cost transparency = relief. The "lump sum" / "installments" framing matters. The ICP simulator surfaced "what if I can't afford it" as a top-3 silent worry.
9 Compliance / legal 92 Refund policy stated plainly. Format options stated accurately. Kathy Decker credentialed correctly. RESOLVED: Bob no longer offers Zoom / online cohorts (that was a COVID-era thing only). The Format line is in-person only (Niwot or Denver/Cherry Creek); no Zoom or online option is implied anywhere.
10 Plain English editor 91 Spec-sheet format. Bolded labels. No jargon except "cohort", which is industry-standard now and not worth defining.

Iteration log:

Email 8: The Decision

Send timing: Day +20. Primary purpose: Clear CTA to enroll. Acknowledge the courage of deciding. Honest framing: a fixed cohort start date (Sept 20, Niwot) with room available, and the only real deadline being the early-bird price. No scarcity. Final score: 93/100

Subject line

Your decision

(A/B test alternate: "Whether to come, and what to do if it's a yes or a no")

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A short note about deciding, and what either answer looks like from here.

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Hi,

You've now seen most of what I can show you in writing.

The framework, the room, the people, the practical details. The thing I haven't told you is that deciding is its own piece of the work. People who say yes don't say yes because all the doubt left. They say yes because they decided to walk through the door with the doubt in their pocket.

I'd be lying if I said the decision is easy. It costs money, it costs ten Tuesday nights (or Thursday, or whichever night your cohort lands on), and it asks you to sit in a room and feel things you've been working hard to manage. None of that's small.

What it gives back, in my honest reading after running this for fifteen years, is a faster path through. Not a shortcut (there isn't one), but a path that has a shape, instead of the shapeless drift most people endure for years.

The next cohort starts in Niwot on Sunday, September 20, and there's room for you in it. I'm not going to tell you "seats are almost gone" or email you "ONLY 2 SPOTS LEFT!!" because that's not how I want you to make this decision. The one real deadline is the price: early-bird tuition is $1,099 through Friday, July 24, and it goes to the regular $1,200 after that. Same program either way.

Three honest options from here:

  1. Yes. Enroll in the September 20 Niwot cohort while the early-bird price is still open. There's room, so the only thing the date affects is what you pay, not whether you can get in.
  2. Not yet. Schedule a free 15-minute call with me. One-on-one, no pitch, no pressure, just answers to whatever's making the decision feel hard. (We also run a free 90-minute group intro workshop twice a year, 2-4 weeks before each new cohort starts. If the timing lines up, I'll mention it on our call.) If "not yet" is still true after we talk, you'll know more than you do today.
  3. Not for me. That's a real, valid answer. If that's where you land, I'm grateful you considered it. I'll take you off this list. Just hit reply with a "no thanks" and you won't hear from me again.

Whichever it's, thank you for the time you've given this. I hope it helped, even if the answer is no.

[Enroll in the Sept 20 Niwot cohort →] [Schedule a 15-min call →]

Rebuilding together, Bob

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Primary: Enroll in the Sept 20 Niwot cohort (early-bird $1,099 through Fri July 24, then $1,200) Secondary: Schedule a 15-min call (evergreen 1:1 with Bob) Tertiary (in body): 90-min group intro workshop, soft mention, twice-a-year offering Quaternary (in body): Reply "no thanks" to unsubscribe

10-Expert Scoring

# Expert Score Notes
1 Direct response copywriter 93 Strong dual-CTA. The third option ("not for me") is a counterintuitive but proven pattern. Increases trust AND reduces unsubscribe-as-spam-flag risk.
2 Brand voice keeper 95 "Walk through the door with the doubt in their pocket" is pure Bob register. The "fifteen years" reference (Bob's been running this since 2009 per §7, ~15-17 years now) checks out.
3 Divorce-recovery clinician 94 "A path that has a shape, instead of the shapeless drift" is clinically resonant. Names the experience of unstructured grief without pathologizing it.
4 Fisher Method scholar 92 No outcome over-claims. "Faster path through. Not a shortcut" mirrors Fisher's own framing of the work.
5 Trauma-informed therapist 93 "You've been working hard to manage" honors the coping that loss demands. No shaming about avoidance.
6 B2C nurture strategist 96 Three-option close (yes / not yet / no) is best-practice for sequence-end. The "no false urgency" line is positioning itself. Turns a sales email into a trust statement.
7 Skeptical prospect 95 "We're not going to email you 'ONLY 2 SPOTS LEFT!!'" disarms the skeptic by anticipating the very tactic Bob is refusing to use.
8 Recently-divorced ICP 92 The "not yet" option is the relief valve. Without it, "yes / no" feels too binary for someone in this state.
9 Compliance / legal 95 Easy unsubscribe stated plainly. No false urgency. No outcome guarantees. Clean.
10 Plain English editor 92 Reading level ~9th grade. Numbered options scan well. Sign-off intact.

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